Friday, 27 September 2019

The mines afire

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1. his bright eyes staring intensely
2. their dangerous soul-filling quickly
3. his loving heart dying suddenly
4. their curious minds draining slowly

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3 comments:

  1. Anonymous27 September 2019 at 10:08

    Nikkita I like your sentences, I think that you should use capital letter to start your sentences

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  2. Anonymous27 September 2019 at 10:12

    I think that you could use the thesaurus to make your words more interesting like instead of bright you could use shimmering or dazzling.

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  3. Anonymous27 September 2019 at 10:15

    I like your sentence his loving heart dying suddenly, because it references back to the back of how he wished to have a different drop from his uncle fred but sadly got forced to work in the brunner mines

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